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| Final Cover with corrections made |
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| Front Cover with mistakes |
Language: Simple, Easy to read and understand. Using the conventions: Masthead, Logo, Slogan, Headlines, Features, Images.
Institution: Wyke Sixth Form College.
Ideology:
Audience: This magazine is aimed at the students of Wyke Sixth Form College ages ranging from 16 onwards. As there are a few adult students, and students that have re-sat years, or in some cases international students that have to learn from the beginning and spend up to 4 or 5 years at Wyke.
Representation: I have used the Wyke colours so that when people see it they will relate it to Wyke College. The image shows that the magazine is for a college, as it has a student reading. Also relates to Wyke College by having the logo.
Hi Gem!
ReplyDeleteYou could:
1. Pull down the top of the white box behind 'Media takes a trip' so that 'Wyke College . . . ' is on the yellow background. The it won't look like it's part of the headline.
2. Put the Wyke web address in the bottom right hand corner to fill that little bit of yellow space.
3. Change 'New Buildings OPENS . . .' to 'New Buildings OPEN . . .'
Other than that, it looks good to me!
You also missed a 't' off the end of 'students' in the 'New Buildings' headline.
ReplyDeleteWell done Gemma, you've worked really hard on this project and your efforts have paid off.
ReplyDeleteThe only suggestions for improvement that I can make are:
- Always use LIIAR to analyse existing products as part of your research (more thorough)
- Always use LIIAR and as much media terminology as you possibly can in your evaluation.
Keep up the great work, and you'll be very happy with your grade at the end of the year :-)